Redline: My New AI Line Editor
And Now You Can Use It!
Hey Revenue Writer,
Most writers don't know if their writing is landing until it's too late.
You write a lot. Most of it goes out without a true editor looking at it. Something is killing your reader's momentum and you can't see it
Your book isn't converting readers into fans and you don't know why.
II had the same problem until I built something to fix it.
Ryan Levesque, the guy behind the book Ask, wrote that he built an AI fire rating system. It scanned his chapters for where the writing went cold. I knew I had to build my own.
Now every chapter of the LAZY Book Launch Model goes through my version first.
I call it Redline.
In racing, redline is where the engine hits maximum power. Right on the edge of too much. That’s where your writing needs to live.
Coasting kills books.
Redline
An AI Line Editing Tool for Revenue Writers
Redline was built specifically for the 3 Course Meal framework.
Every section you write has three components: appetizer, meat, and dessert. Redline knows exactly what each one should do. It tells you when they don’t.
Most editors have never heard of a dessert sentence.
Redline rates your writing before your reader does.
Paste a single section or drop an entire chapter. Redline scores your appetizer, your meat, and your dessert for every 1-3-1 block. Each section gets a fire rating from 🔥 to 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥 with a note on what’s cold and why.
Redline doesn’t rewrite, it just tells you where you’re cold.
Here is an example of me using Redline for my example above, it took me 3 rewrites to achieve redlining for the full section.
Premium subscribers get access to the full prompt so they can input into Claude or ChatGPT to create their own Redline Editor.
I personally use Claude with a Mini Book Revenue Writers Project and have a Redline editor conversation inside that. You could create a custom GPT with it. Or simply paste it into whatever AI and then add your text.
Use this prompt in whatever way works for you.
If you want to edit it to match more your style, feel free.
You can also use AI to analyze your writing and have it rewrite the parameters using the same framework I used.
Enjoy
- Coach Chris Stanley
